ME, Myself, and that guy over there

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ME, Myself, and that guy over there

Post by karayourock3 on Sat Dec 18, 2010 1:09 am

I had to make a Poem for my Lititure class so I decided to share it with you, I had to take out a line in the first part of the poem because of my school...



Me, Myself, and that guy over there..



MY name is simply Kara
and I am only twelve
In Books I will delve

Snowglobes are my collection
as anyone can see
this is a little snapshot
of me just being me

Family is so special
that's where I like to be
the four of us together
in perfect harmoney

I guess I am pretty simple
many of you may know
I hope that when I am older
fun places I will go.

-Kara

[i]It's a little cheesy since it had to be about me[/]

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Post by emmie on Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:52 am

great job .. i like it

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Post by Lee♥ on Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:17 pm

Awesome! You shud b a poet! =]

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Post by NikkiAngel877 on Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:05 am

Your a year older then me

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Post by Kellz on Wed Dec 29, 2010 12:40 pm

Oh my, Kara. I've heard some of your poems before (or stories), and this is just simply wonderful! (: No, I don't think it sound even 1% cheesy! I love how it describes you, that shows more about the poet. Your poems are simply splendid, and I really do hope to hear more of your work (stories, or poems) soon because they are really good. Yes, I agree with Lee, you should be a poet. If that's what you want to do, follow your dreams! You will succeed, you are very good at writing poems. If you don't want to do that as your career, then you can be whatever you want to be. Very good work, Kara. (:

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Post by karayourock3 on Thu Dec 30, 2010 6:00 am

Kelly99 wrote:Oh my, Kara. I've heard some of your poems before (or stories), and this is just simply wonderful! (: No, I don't think it sound even 1% cheesy! I love how it describes you, that shows more about the poet. Your poems are simply splendid, and I really do hope to hear more of your work (stories, or poems) soon because they are really good. Yes, I agree with Lee, you should be a poet. If that's what you want to do, follow your dreams! You will succeed, you are very good at writing poems. If you don't want to do that as your career, then you can be whatever you want to be. Very good work, Kara. (:

Thanks! Most of my stories are horrible though

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Post by Kellz on Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:09 am

karayourock3 wrote:
Kelly99 wrote:Oh my, Kara. I've heard some of your poems before (or stories), and this is just simply wonderful! (: No, I don't think it sound even 1% cheesy! I love how it describes you, that shows more about the poet. Your poems are simply splendid, and I really do hope to hear more of your work (stories, or poems) soon because they are really good. Yes, I agree with Lee, you should be a poet. If that's what you want to do, follow your dreams! You will succeed, you are very good at writing poems. If you don't want to do that as your career, then you can be whatever you want to be. Very good work, Kara. (:

Thanks! Most of my stories are horrible though
Not in my opinion they're not! I always think your stories are superb, Kara! (:

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