The Mystery Moonlight

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Post by Anita on Mon May 09, 2011 1:37 am

:melikey: Nice story I like it!

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Post by GwynethLove on Sun May 22, 2011 1:59 am

Chapter 6 will begin SOON!

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Post by Kellz on Sun May 22, 2011 7:27 am

I like the book so far (:
It's reallyyyy good.
Can't wait for more!

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by GwynethLove on Mon May 23, 2011 12:26 am

Chapter 6:


After everyone had fun, it was 12:00 AM and the girls went fast asleep. But then, at 12:30 AM, Mary woke up by a noise from a bush outside.

Mary: huh?

-Mary wakes up Sierra-

Mary (whispers): Sierra! Wake up!


You see, Mary and Sierra always came together in something like this.

-Sierra wakes up-


Sierra (whispers): Mary? What's going on?
Mary (whispers): I heard something outside, let's go!

Sierra and Mary opened the backyard with their flashlights, and Mary closed the door quietly and they went out of the Sun Room.

But then, someone, or something was outside.

-Girls hear a running noise-

Sierra: Mary....
Mary: Whose here?! Come out, NOW!

- a boy in black clothing comes-

Mary & Sierra: AHHH!!!!!!!
Boy: Be quiet!

-Mary and Sierra gets quiet-

Mary: who...are....y...ou....
Boy: I'm Jacob... and I am a secret spy...
Sierra: OMG...
Jacob: Someone stole a very valuable diamond...
Mary: and?
Jacob: It looks like this...

-Jacob shows them the poster of the diamond necklace-

-Mary and Sierra gasps-

Mary and Sierra knew that diamond anywhere! Liz wore that necklace!

Mary: We know that person who was wearing it Jacob!
Jacob: You do?
Sierra: Do you know Liz McTosh?
Jacob: Why yes, her brother Mike McTosh stole a valuable bracelet for Liz.
Mary: Liz McTosh wore that necklace!
Jacob: I have to give a special task..

Sierra and Mary were confused. "A special task? We aren't even spies..." They wanted to say that but they said it in their heads..

Jacob: You have to get that necklace before its too late.
Sierra: She might be a criminal..
Mary: ...and she was rude about the necklace...
Sierra: ...she said she got it from 'Luke's Diamond Jewelry St-
Jacob: That's where it was stolen! Very good job with that clue girls!
Mary: Sierra, we got to make some little scene.
Sierra: About me losing my necklace!
Jacob: That MAY work..
Mary: Will you come tomorrow?
Jacob: Yes, but at 10:00 PM...That's when Moonlight comes and I drop by.
Mary: You come when there is the Moonlight comes?
Sierra: We'll be ready by then!
Jacob: Good, see you guys later..Bye
Sierra and Mary: Bye!

-Jacob runs fast and disappears-

Sierra: He's a fast runner..
Mary: I agree.
Sierra: Let's go back to sleep..
Mary: Come on, let's go.

- Girls go in the living room and closed the door-

Sierra: Goodnight Mary.
Mary: goodnight Sierra.

-Girls go to sleep-


Mary and Sierra had a special task from Jacob, a secret spy, but they had to be a little smart to try and get that necklace to solve the problem. But, HOW?

To be continued in Chapter 7 of The Mystery Moonlight

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Post by Kellz on Mon May 23, 2011 11:27 am

Chapter 6 was so mysterious and suspenseful!

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by ~Rain~ on Wed May 25, 2011 8:31 am

I love your story.
One thing, if their in 6th grade, how are they 16? Usually, if you're 16 you're in high school

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by GwynethLove on Wed May 25, 2011 8:47 am

oops...

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by Anita on Wed May 25, 2011 8:49 am

I loved the story!When are you gonna make chapter 7?

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by GwynethLove on Wed May 25, 2011 8:51 am

oh its gonna happen soon..

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Post by Noel on Wed May 25, 2011 9:35 am

Nice story! But one problem.. they're 16 and they're in 6th grade. Usually you're 11/12 in 6th

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Post by Anita on Wed May 25, 2011 9:37 am

Noel wrote:Nice story! But one problem.. they're 16 and they're in 6th grade. Usually you're 11/12 in 6th
Yeah I agree with Noel but you can always edit the setting

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Post by Noel on Wed May 25, 2011 10:47 am

staraugust182 wrote:
Noel wrote:Nice story! But one problem.. they're 16 and they're in 6th grade. Usually you're 11/12 in 6th
Yeah I agree with Noel but you can always edit the setting
Yup Either change their ages, or change their grade

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by AleciaAutumn10 on Thu May 26, 2011 12:53 am

Nice story !
but how did the pizza guy know it was a sleepover party? oO

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by GwynethLove on Fri May 27, 2011 10:51 am

Yep.. Guess I have to keep track... Anyways...

Chapter 7:

The next day at 8:00 AM...
Liz: RISE AND SHINE!
Girls: ugh...Liz...
Liz: come on!
Sierra: Hey Lizzie..
Liz: MY NAME ISN'T LIZZIE SUSIE!
Mary: You two can get alo-

But before Mary could finish Liz and Sierra called names at each other screaming.

Liz: GROUND-HOG!
Sierra: PIZZA-NOT-SO-COOL!
Liz: How dare you say that to me!!
Sierra: ..You're not the queen of England..

-everyone else laugh-

Liz: EXCUSE ME?
Sierra: ...nothing..
Liz: EXCUSE ME?
Sierra: .. do you hear something? ITS A MOUSE.
Liz: UGH!!!!!!!

(Liz jumps on Sierra)

Sierra: AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!HELP ME! MARY!!!
Mary: STOP IT, NOW!!
Liz: She started it..
Sierra: No I didn't!
Liz: yeah you did.
Sierra: UGH!!

(Sierra jumps on Liz)

Liz: MIA!!!!!!!!!!

(Mia hurts Sierra)

Sierra: OOOWWWW!!!!
Mia: That's what you get for hurting my BFF Liz!
Sierra: you bruised my leg Mia!
Mia: hahaha!

(Liz and Mia start laughing at Sierra)

Sierra: It hurts..Mary..
Mary: Hang on, I'll get an ice pack.

(Liz stops Mary)

Liz: OH STOP!

(Mary turns around)

Liz: she's lying.
Mary: Be quiet Liz.
Mia: yeah be quiet Li-
Liz: I will hurt you then Lockwood!
Mary: No you won't..
Liz: It's my-

(Mary walks off)

Liz: grr...
Mia: Whatever Mary.

After Mia and Liz left the kitchen Mary took out an ice pack from the freezer and went back to the living room where the others, except Mia and Liz, who had their arms crossed making their, "mean" face at Mary and the others. Mary gave the ice pack to Sierra and Sierra put it on her leg.

Sierra: thanks M.
Mary: welcome S.

To be continued in Chapter 8..

Sorry if its short! I was kinda lazy..

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Re: The Mystery Moonlight

Post by AleciaAutumn10 on Fri May 27, 2011 4:13 pm

Wow, nice distraction.
Cant wait to see how they get the necklace back !

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