Remember those good times?

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Remember those good times?

Post by Anita on Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:11 am

This is a story i'm making

*remember those good times?*
Mimi-The main character
Dafne-Her 1st bff
Joselin-2nd bff
Gabby-3rd bff
Angy-4th bff
AJ-The trouble maker
Mr.Tomes-5th grade teacher
*there is gonna be alot more characters*
This book is dedicated to all my friends and more and all those awesome memories together

Anita
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Post by Anita on Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:26 am

Chapter 1
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Mimi-. walking in breakfast sees Joselin Jaquleyn Dafne Gabby Jaidah Tay-Tay and Angy .
Friends-Hey Mimi!!!
Mimi-Hey guys :[:]
Gabby-What's wrong are you happy or sad?
Mimi-Both
Dafne-What's wrong?!?!?!?!
Mimi-I don't know I was looking through the 1st and 2nd grade year books!
All-O to the M to the G!!!!!!!
Joselin-I thought they were all lost!!!
Mimi-I found mine... . goes get breakfast and comes to sit down with friends .
All-. goes around Mimi and looks .
Mimi-Remember those good times?. thinks .
Angy-yup
Mimi-Gabby!!!remember in the begging of 3rd grade when we would fight? lol
Gabby-Yeah remember Jaidah?
Jaidah-Oh yeah you guys weren't her friends and I decided not too also and she started crying right?
All except Mimi-Yup!!! . Mimi looking through .
Dafne-Already 7:50?!?!? awwww man
Jaquleyn and Angy-Yeah
Joselin-Mimi keep looking through that yearbook
Mimi-okay okay lol
. AJ walks in and goes to the table and starts laughing .
Tay-Tay-What do you want AJ?
AJ-Nothing I just wanted to see how funny this was gonna be!
. all the boys laugh .
Tay-Tay-I'ts not funny you guys!
AJ-ok ok . the boys leave .
Dafne-Ahhhhhhh!!!!!
Mimi- . looks around .
Gabby-O
Tay-Tay-to
Angy-The M
Jaquleyn-to
Jaidah-the
Joselin and Mimi-G!!!!
To be continued

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Post by DjAngel145 on Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:28 am

LoL. Kewl Can't wait for the next chapter (:

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Post by Anita on Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:42 am

Thanks!I think your story is gonna be very good too. (:

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Post by DjAngel145 on Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:50 am

Aww.... Thx

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Post by emmie on Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:07 am

good story! star! =D

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Post by Anita on Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:55 am

Thanks Riya!

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Post by emmie on Sat Apr 02, 2011 8:18 am

np! i'm bad at writing haha!

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Post by Anita on Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:14 am

Chapter 2
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Gabby-What happeened?!?!?!
Angy-Miss.Megan just slipped on juice!
Gabby-OMG!
Mimi-. helps up .
Mimi-guys she's ok
All-phew okay
Tay-Tay-ok ok lets look at the yearbooks again!
Mimi-alright . looks through .
Gabby-Mimi remember that time when Dafne Joselin and Angy spilled fake milk? lol
Dafne Joselin Angy and Mimi-Yup!!It was funny:)
Jaidah-Guys it's 8o'clock now....
All-A!!!!
All-. takes backpacks throws food away and leaves .
* in the class*
Mr.Tomes-. yelling at AJ I said go do your story!
Dafne-* giggles *
All-. takes out folder and puts them in the folder basket .
Dafne- .whispering to Mimi . It's april fools day let's do a prank!
Mimi-Ok!How though?
Dafne we act like were mad at eachother and we aren't friends anymore
Mimi-Ok!
Both-. high fives .
To be continued!!

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Post by Daize on Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:50 am

I love it!
You could show it to a producer and maybe he could make it into a show

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Post by Anita on Thu Apr 07, 2011 7:42 am

^^ XD my friends dad is a producer so I'll see about that
And thanks btw

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Post by Anita on Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:07 am

Chapter 3
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Mimi-wait let's not do this please?
Dafne-why?
Mimi-well what is they make us promise?
Dafne-your right I guess the pranks over
* the next day *
Mimi- * walks into class *
Dafne-Hey Mimi!
Tay-Tay-Hey Mimi!
Angy-Hey Mimi!
Jaidah-Hey Mimi!
Joselin-Hey Mimi!
Gabby-Hey Mimi!
Jacquleyn-Hey Mimi!
Mr.Tomes-Good morning Mimi you may notice that we switched desks
Mimi-hey guys!And AJ that's not funny
Mr.Tomes-AJ to the office
AJ-yes sir..... D:<
Gabby-* giggles *
Mimi-* puts up backpack *
Joselin-Mimi you sit here!
Mimi- * walks to table * awesome my dream table!With all my friends in it!
Tay-Tay-Yeah.. but if we talk to much we'll have to move
Mimi-Oh yeah.....
Angy-look it's already 10:15!!!
Gabby-awwww man gym class D:
The rest-Yeah gym class!
Everyone in the class- * gets in class *
Brandon-Ha!I skipped you! * all the boys laugh *
Mimi- * gets mad * guys?
Jaidah and Jaquelyn-Here skip us!
Dafne and Joselin-I'm board.....................
Tay-Tay- * yells from the gym to the portabals * Come on guys!!!!!!
All but Tay-Tay-Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!ok!
* after gym class *
Brandon-Yeah are team won the volleyball championship!!!!!!!!!
All-We won we won we won we won!!!!!
Jaquleyn-Ummmmmmmmmm guys it's dark outside
Mimi and Gabby- * looks outside * yeah.....
* annocments come on *
Annocments-All the 5th grade portabal kids please go inside!
Mr.Tomes- * panics * =O ok ok guys take what you guys need!!!!
All-Yes sir!
* starts to storm outside *
All- * runs quickly in the building and Mrs.Tomes room *
Dafne-Were alive!!!!!!!
Mimi-I hope we have a good rest of the week
Mr.Tomes-Oh we will
All-YAY!!!
Mr.Tomes-Class Mrs.Judkins 1st grade class is here!
Mrs.Judkins-Okay we have smarties for everyone and a song in chorus of course!
Mrs.Judkins class- * sings *
All the girls-Awwww they sound like little angels
Mimi-XD my sister is in that class!
Dafne-yeah yeah who cares now be quite so I could here
Mimi-fine D:
* 1st graders leave *
Mimi-YAY smarties!
* lights turn out *
Everyone except Mimi- * yells out Mimi?!?!?! . , . *
Mimi-What? !
To be continued.......................................

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Post by Anita on Sun May 08, 2011 1:44 am

Chapter 4
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*lights turn back on and everyone is staring at Mimi*
Mimi-Hehe....Ummm guys?
AJ-Get her!!!!!!
All- *chases Mimi around the school*
Mimi-Ahhhhh!!! *hides*
Mimi-Phew!I lost them and what did I do?
Gabby-Mimi?!?!!?!?!?!
Mimi-*says quietly* Yes...?
Gabby-Mimi!I'm not mad!
Mimi-Yeah right
Gabby-Wow.....
All-Happy April Fools!!!!!!!!!!
Mimi-Hahaahahaha guys!
*@ end of the day*
Dafne and Mimi walk into the gym together
Dafne-Rofl!!!!Mark,You're late for your car!!
Mimi-Yeah!Remember car riders are outside... lol
Mark-Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!What am I doing here?!?!?!
Mimi and Dafne-Haahahahahahaah!

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Post by Lovelistic on Sun May 08, 2011 1:48 am

Wow! I love this story (: Chapter Four made me laugh at the end. LOL XD

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Post by GwynethLove on Sun May 08, 2011 1:54 am

cool story!

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Post by Anita on Sun May 08, 2011 2:01 am

Haha thanks guys

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Re: Remember those good times?

Post by Cheer on Mon May 09, 2011 1:32 am

I like your story.

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Post by Anita on Mon May 09, 2011 1:36 am

Thanks Jessica means alot!

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Post by Cheer on Mon May 09, 2011 1:36 am

You're welcome :*

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Post by Anita on Mon May 09, 2011 1:52 am

lol it isn't that good of a story.

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Post by Anita on Mon May 09, 2011 2:28 am

Chapter 5
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Mimi-Oh there goes my bus bye Dafne!
Dafne-There goes mine too bye!
*both hugs*
Joselin-Ughhh why is Mimi so rude?!?!
Angy-Um,I don't think she's rude geez.
Joselin-Whatever i'm gonna get revenge there's my bus bye.
Angy-Ummmmm bye?
Brandon-Ah!I'm telling Mimi ha!
Joselin-*turns around* what no!!!! Ahhh!!
Brandon-There's my bus!Bye dudes!
Angy-I'm not a dude.
Brandon-Um ok?
*At Mimi's house*
Mimi-Thanks for coming over Joselin!
Joselin-Oh,sure no problem! :roll:
*Door bell rings*
Mimi-I'll get it!Stay here Joselin!
Joselin-Alright
Gabby and Dafne-Hey Mimi!!!
Mimi-Hey guys!
Joselin- Hi :roll:
Mimi- *Turns around*
Mimi-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

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Post by Cheer on Mon May 09, 2011 2:29 am

Nice update ^^

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Post by Anita on Fri May 27, 2011 10:17 am

Chapter 6
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Mimi-Joselin get my guinea pig out of there right now!!
*Gabby turns around*
Gabby-OMG what happened?!
Mimi-She has my guinea pig in the sink!! D:
Joselin-Here take your Guinea pig..!
Mimi-LEAVE NOW!
Joselin-FINE!I'm not your friend anymore you always think your the boss of everyone and you think your so popular! :evil:
*Joselin Leaves*
Dafne and Gabby-Ugh...She's so rude!Are you okay Mimi?
Mimi-Ugh..Yeah i'm okay..it's just that we've been friends since 4th grade..
Dafne-Mimi come on cheer up,iv'e been your friend since Pre-K!
Gabby-Yeah same here!
Mimi-You know what..you guys are right!Thanks guys
*Hugs*
Mimi-Alright Gabby hand me my phone i'm gonna delete her from my contacts and block her number too.
*Deletes*
Mimi-So you guys wanna sleepover?
Gabby and Dafne-Sure! Jinks!
Mimi-Hahaha come on guys it's getting late! :O
*At breakfast*
Gabby-Dafne look,I see Joselin yelling at Mimi! (she whispered that)
Mimi-Okay fine then! :cry:
*Mimi walks to another table crying*
Dafne-Wanna talk to her after we get our food?
Gabby-Sure!
*At the table*
Dafne and Gabby-Mimi what's wrong?! D:
Mimi-Joselin yelled at me saying "I was a no good person and deserve to go to far away land!" :cry:
*Angy,Jaqcuelyn,Jaidah,and Tay-Tay walk in*
*After Breakfast*
Mimi-Where's Joselin Mr.Tomes?
Mr.Tomes-She went to the office.
Mimi-Well...why?
Mr.Tomes-For doing all those things to you.
Mimi-*whispers to friends saying how does he know?"
Mr.Tomes-I heard that
Mimi-Well how?
Mr.Tomes-I saw her.And she is also moving to South Africa tomorrow.
Mimi- *kind of smiling*
*At lunch*
Mimi-Hey guys here are the invites to my Birthday Bash!
All-Wow cool!I'm so coming! Wait..When is it though?
Mimi-Next week on Sunday!
All-Oh okay i'll be there!
Jaqcuelyn-Well I can't come it's my family reunion sorry!
Mimi-Oh!It's okay I understand!
To be continued.......

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Post by GwynethLove on Fri May 27, 2011 10:34 am

Wow!

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Post by AleciaAutumn10 on Sat May 28, 2011 3:30 am

Cool story

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