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Song of the sea

Post by JLBABV on Sat Jun 25, 2011 7:25 am

"The song of the sea echoes over the waves
The notes are sharp and clear!
Listen closely, concentrate
and the song of the sea, you shall hear!

It comes as a whisper
Quiet and small, as still as a lagoon
Be patient, dear friend, and close your eyes
You'll hear the melody soon!

In the heart of a storm, when fear grips your heart
That's when it is hardest to hear the song
But for those who wait for the calm to come
They'll realise it was there all along!"

I just made this up lol i'll add more to it as it comes


Last edited by JLBABV on Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:13 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Changed words)
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Post by muffinatormanic on Sat Jun 25, 2011 7:31 am

Cute:) It's like someone trying to discover one's self
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Post by JLBABV on Sat Jun 25, 2011 8:24 am

Thank you Muffin
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Post by ItalianPrincess on Mon Jun 27, 2011 8:54 am

That is beautiful
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Post by JLBABV on Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:23 am

Aww ty trinity
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Post by SkylarRockin on Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:09 pm

Wonderful

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Post by JLBABV on Tue Jun 28, 2011 1:28 am

Thanks Skylar
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Post by Anita on Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:15 am

Oh wow,Jessie I love it,it sounds so amazing!

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Post by helenacool18 on Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:19 am

Its beautiful !
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Post by JLBABV on Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:21 am

Thanks Anita and Helena
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Post by retheriolu on Tue Jun 28, 2011 1:49 pm

That is beautiful! I love it! I don't read much poetry, but this is fantastic!
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Post by ItalianPrincess on Tue Jun 28, 2011 1:51 pm

I love how you discribe things so well it's just a beautiful poem
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Post by JLBABV on Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:37 am

Thanks
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Post by Bear on Fri Jul 01, 2011 10:11 am

I love it, creative!
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Post by AleciaAutumn10 on Wed Jul 06, 2011 11:24 pm

Great poem!
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Post by Loveablegirl on Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:46 pm

very nice it very pretty
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Post by Cheer on Sun Jul 17, 2011 2:50 pm

I like it ^-^
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Post by JLBABV on Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:10 am

Thanks everyone
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Post by Daize on Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:27 am

Aww, I love it :]
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