Your Mistake

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Your Mistake

Post by allybutterscotch28 on Sat Jun 23, 2012 12:56 am

!WARNING!
This story's genre is what I call "somewhat-but-not-really-horror"
So basically, it's kind of scary. Or at least that's what I was going for. (:
Enjoy!

Your Mistake
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Some things cannot be undone. There are times when you wish to go back, and yet you cannot. You must go on, for thereís nothing to be done. Just go on, and live your life as if nothing has happened. Or at least try to go on.
This is the story of someoneís terrible mistake. Of a mistake that was impossible to undo. Of a fateful disaster, oh such a silly thing to do. This is the story of your terrible mistake.

You stand with trembling hands in a room all alone. No windows, no lights. Just you in this room. In this cold dark room. You understand now, yes? Itís just you in this room. You are shaking mightily; as if there was an earthquake only you were in. Youíre covered in cold sweat and breathing quite heavily.
Itís dark, youíre cold, youíre scared, and your blood is pounding in your ears. You can hear your heart pumping against your ribs, trying to force itself out of your chest.
Youíre feeling annoyed. Like you want to scream and cry. You want to rip that beating heart of yours out.
Then, your lips curl up into a strange twisted smile. A shaky laugh escapes your mouth and echoes in this room youíre in. Tears follow, flowing down your face as you continue laughing. Swirling memories of nothing enter your mind. Nothing. That is the problem. You canít remember anything. From your past to the present and even how you ended up here.
Then, thereís a crack and madness ensues, wrapping around your mind and controlling your every movement. You suddenly remember, this is how it all happened. This is why youíre here.



If you want to read more, comment below!

allybutterscotch28
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Re: Your Mistake

Post by Cheer on Sat Jun 23, 2012 1:24 am

Ooooh horror~
Horror is my favouriteee c:

Good start. I'd like to read more.

Cheer
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Re: Your Mistake

Post by Noel on Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:37 pm

Very nice. The story flowed smoothly and I liked your descriptions!

Noel
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